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you told me
we walked among dead -
that we're all
(nec)romanticists;

now, dearest, i know
why skeletons
always look like
they're smiling.
blah this is super hit or miss and i'm not sure which yet ignore me
considering taking the second stanza out. what do you think?
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AeonFlora Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Hit :)
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counting-vertebrae Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you! :D
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gossamerdissonance Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014  Student Writer
*poetry
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gossamerdissonance Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014  Student Writer
Freaking out because your petty is absolutely genius
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counting-vertebrae Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Student Writer
Ah, thank you ;v;
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A-Lovely-Anxiety Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
i enjoy this immensely.  especially your play on (nec)romanticists.

very lovely indeed.

i also think the second stanza is nice, but i don't think it's necessarily needed.  so if you would like to take it out, don't worry.  the poem will still be great without it.
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counting-vertebrae Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you so much! :hug:
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AlecBell Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014
Droll! I like the second stanza.
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counting-vertebrae Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you! :)
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AlecBell Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014
My pleasure!!
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