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my cracked skull
leaks grey matter &
selenic steam, but dearest,
i can talk myself
into a deity;

i'm a galaxy boy
melting my mind
into radioactivity
i think i've maybe lost it completely
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empty-lungs Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
this is lovely, i love the theme of currents/electricity, it gives a really cool image to the whole piece <3
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counting-vertebrae Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you so much! :heart: Also for the favorite.
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SodomizedCupcakes Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013
Nice work- I like the image and the flow to it. It needs a complimentary illustration almost. o.o
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counting-vertebrae Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you so much! Also for the favorite. :heart:
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TheMoltenDragon Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Ooh I like this
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counting-vertebrae Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you! :hug:
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FieryDownpour479 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the last stanza so much! It's really quite beautiful!
The whole thing is so lovely!
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counting-vertebrae Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you so, so much - I'm glad you think so! :heart:
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FieryDownpour479 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're so very welcome! :heart:
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FallonDarkdreamer Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Student
Amazing, I'd really love to learn your mind set through these writing pieces.
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