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a cigar-store solipsist
stuffing towels in doorways,
i was crowned prince asphyxia;
oh, do not fall in love with
dead boys - you can't make
martyrs out of suicide drones.
full title: i speak too fast for necromancy, but i've got all the god complex.

i should've kept my goddamn mouth shut
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marlboroblacks Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
That last line is so breathtaking
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counting-vertebrae Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you so much :heart:
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DeriveAnemone Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Very intriguing. :heart:
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counting-vertebrae Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you! :heart:
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flyfalldieblood Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014
I really like this poem, it's great :)

In line 3, however, I think you wrote 'price' instead of 'prince'
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counting-vertebrae Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Student Writer
Oh god. How did I not notice that, haha? Thank you. :D
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neonsquiggle Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I love love love the words. 
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counting-vertebrae Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you so much. :heart:
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Adonael Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I like the braggadocios tone - that's how I read it anyway. The images were nice and I got a sense of a story waiting to be told.
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counting-vertebrae Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014  Student Writer
I did intend for that sort of tone, especially with the title, haha. Thank you!
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