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snap your marlboro bones &
grind them into watercolors -
bay-water boy, paint your brains
on the wallpaper like a sinner's
sermon; you won't wilt the way
that deities do, you solipsist:
you're just a suicide drone.
maybe wanna blow my brains out maybe just want out of this head & the drum beat of cheer-up pills says it gets better but i'm only getting worse

i'm so dizzy get outta my head/tell your congressmen i'm a migraine away from destroying government property/for a writer i really haven't a way with words/when living in your own body makes your skin crawl
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Mis-tl Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I don't know what to say about this,
I just want you to know that your poem cuts yet another person deeply.
I love this so much it's going straight into my favorites. <3
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counting-vertebrae Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you so, so much! <3
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insomniaplague Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You're very good. But, you have to stop making me feel things. :stare: I don't wanna relate to this at all.
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counting-vertebrae Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you. Aha, sorry about the feelings. :XD:
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marlboroblacks Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
this is absolutely amazing.
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counting-vertebrae Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you :heart:
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dog-on-the-floor Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Student Writer
i think my soul was just crushed into a million little pieces... this one hits deep
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counting-vertebrae Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Student Writer
Sorry about that, haha.
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Viol-Dove-Teshire Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Student Writer
Absolutely amazing, this one touches home with me. The first four lines are my favorite.
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counting-vertebrae Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you!
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