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oh, poet boy,
you are not
thumbed bruises
or honey bones
& you have only
ever been a god
inside of your own head
i would love to drink your sorrows but i can't quite choke down my own.
this is a reverse ego feed. i should be doing homework instead of writing generic poetry.
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tubefed Jan 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
"I should be doing homework instead of writing generic poetry." DID YOU JUST SUMMARIZE MY ACADEMIC FAILURE, WHAT. I really should be doing homework instead of reading "generic poetry." :XD:

Anyways, the last 3 lines are flawless. ^^ You always seem to pull off a good ending.
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counting-vertebrae Jan 28, 2014  Student Writer
Haha, poetry is procrastination for me more often than I'd like to admit. :XD:

Thank you so much! :heart:
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i-am-a-bridgewalker Nov 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
damn. I know this feeling. I think all of us do.
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counting-vertebrae Nov 27, 2013  Student Writer
unfortunately so, haha.
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RoseScarlet Nov 10, 2013  Student Writer
I love how the title ends the poem.
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counting-vertebrae Nov 10, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you! :heart:
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RoseScarlet Nov 16, 2013  Student Writer
welcome <3 :iconfatpandaplz:
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anila73 Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
hey i actually like this it's so aw
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counting-vertebrae Nov 4, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you, dear. :heart: Also for the favorite!
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ebazii Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
GOD DAMNOIT GET ON SKYPE
by the way look at patrick im cryihn sonja-blayde.tumblr.com/post/6…
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