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mend your brittle
poet fingers &
nurse your static head

sunwashed--
cherry lips &
blue, blue fingernails

[girls like you are
selenium-sweet &
withering]
I wrote most of this a few days ago while I was talking to *ebazii (who is amazing wow) and mostly just messed around with it unsuccessfully from there.
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throughangelseyes7 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013
I have used the title of your poem in a poem of mine for a contest on :iconthetitlepage:. You can see it in my gallery. Beautiful deviation and great title! Thank you!
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counting-vertebrae Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you! :heart: It's awesome to be included in such a unique piece. :D
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Line-Hodepine Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is really good, gives great imagery and great emotions. :)
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counting-vertebrae Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Student Writer
Thanks! I'm glad you think so! :love:
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empty-lungs Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is so beautiful, I feel like it's a plea for someone to stay as they are, to carry on writing poetry, to calm down and to keep themselves alive? I'm not sure but it's incredible and I love that you compressed it into as few words as you did - the imagery is very beautiful and I'm going to check out more of your gallery! Well done!
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counting-vertebrae Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Student Writer
Oh my gosh! I'm glad you like it! :heart: Thank you for sharing your interpretation of it, as well. :D I really appreciate your kind feedback.
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empty-lungs Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
you're very welcome - I haven't properly looked at a poem and interpreted it since July and it was kind of idk refreshing for me to do it again :) :hug:
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counting-vertebrae Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Student Writer
I totally understand how you feel! It's nice to hear I could help you out in that respect, haha. :hug:
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lkmk Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
very interesting poem.
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counting-vertebrae Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you! :heart: Also for the favorite.
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