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telluric vapor settles
between spidered ribs

dysphoric--
rotting lace &
smoke spirals

dearest,
we'll decay
like the red-eyed girls
behind bronze mirrors
scrapped because wow no.
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OurBraveHeroine Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013   Writer
so beautiful and so vivid :heart: 
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counting-vertebrae Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you so much. :heart:
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OurBraveHeroine Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013   Writer
You're welcome :)
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luckyveda Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Student
I love the flow of "dearest, we'll decay" I'll admit I'm not sure what's gong on in the first few lines though ^^
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counting-vertebrae Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Student Writer
Ah, thanks. :heart: And I do know what you're saying about the first few lines--they're a little abstract and maybe overly-fragmented. ><
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autumn-spirit Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013
"rotting lace" that's brilliant :D
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counting-vertebrae Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Student Writer
Thanks! :heart:
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chancerox Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
had to pull out my dictionary for this one ;) 

i absolutely adore the last stanza. 
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counting-vertebrae Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Student Writer
Haha, thank you! I'm glad you do. :D
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lkmk Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
woah. nice use of imagery.
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