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we are
cobwebbed & sinking
between piano strings

(gleaming
ghost writers;
charming, crystalline)

you keep your skeletons
rotting in the backyard
instead of your closet--
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FieryDownpour479 Nov 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The way you've strung these words together is so beautifully crafted! I especially love the first stanza (but basically I love anything relating to pianos). And it all has a rather beautiful sound to it while also have a bit of a creepy feeling to it. It's just wonderful!
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counting-vertebrae Nov 24, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you so much! :heart: I'm glad you think so! :D
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FieryDownpour479 Nov 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're so very welcome! :D
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HippieHebe Sep 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
love the wording in this
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counting-vertebrae Sep 1, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you! :heart: Also for the favorite!
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SilverInkblot Aug 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hi there! Just a note to let you know that I've featured this piece in my journal :)
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counting-vertebrae Aug 31, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you so much! :heart:
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:iconarinadadragonspeaker:
Very well done! I love all the images you get across here, especially that of the first stanza.
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counting-vertebrae Aug 30, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you! :heart: I really appreciate the feedback.
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