literature

Inconclusive

Deviation Actions

counting-vertebrae's avatar
Published:
424 Views

Literature Text

And you were twisted with the potential of a goldmine
You were ink black and addled and you had your
fingerprints stained into tiffany vases and prodigality
And I forged all my sympathies, signed strictly apathetic
While you were in the guise of composites and bleached knuckles
Aphorisms never meant as much to paradigms or gritted teeth
but I digress; I crafted men out of plate tectonics
Ninety degrees from your contempt and
At the rinds you will find plaster and
thirty molecules of carbon and
Don't you ever want to be the one to split the world in two?
You reassure me that your only certainties are relevance and Catch-22s and
You bled sulfur through your fingertips and your laughter was like
mile-long shadows and nonexistence.
Edited things because I change my mind too quickly about my own writing.
Comments149
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
ClozapineX's avatar
I enjoyed reading through this piece thoroughly as well.
It differs (in my mind) from solipsism in the way that it reads more like spoken word poetry rather than lyrics.

Anyhow, though I enjoyed the poem, would you be able to explain the line about "tiffany vases" to me?
I've not actually heard of those before and so I've missed the metaphor.