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we'll kiss hell's palms like
wretched ministers
before we give sermons tonight;
yellowed wayfarers
pacing scaffolds, we long
to wake immaculate -
deceased
I have a tendency to start hating my work 0.3 seconds after I post it. This is no exception.
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I honestly feel the same way about 95% of what I write. But this? It's just amazing. So bold, such good imagery, and then an ending that really packs a punch. I hope that you no longer hate this. Because it's great. :+favlove:
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counting-vertebrae Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013  Student Writer
Oh gosh, honestly thank you so, so much. I'm never the most confident in what I write and wind up posting things I feel, for lack of a better word, blah about. :XD: But I really appreciate your comment! :heart:
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I get that. But this really is wonderful. Just wonderful.
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counting-vertebrae Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013  Student Writer
I'm really glad you think so. :hug: Thank you.
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JayDanjerCobain Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Congrats on the DLD, well deserved for such a wonderful piece!
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counting-vertebrae Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you so much! :hug:
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lintu47 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
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counting-vertebrae Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you! I really appreciate the feature! I'll be sure to check out some of the other pieces. :D
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lintu47 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
    My pleasure :happybounce:
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DailyLitDeviations Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2013
Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by DLD (Daily Literature Deviations) in a news article that can be found here. Be sure to check out the other artists featured and show your support by :+fav:ing the News Article.

Keep writing and keep creating.
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